With regard to your inquiry...

[Jade]

Hi folks!

Somebody awake to proof read this?

Thank you!


Jade
With regard to your inquiry for property 2260 loated in Palma de Gandia, please be informed that it is located on a very pretty spot in the old part of the town. The property needs complete refurbishing work, which will give an enchanting style to the house once it is down.

 

[omeyas]

Hi folks!

Somebody awake to proof read this?

Thank you!


Jade
With regard to your inquiry for property 2260 loated in Palma de Gandia, please be informed that it is located on a very pretty spot in the old part of the town. The property needs complete refurbishing work, which will give an enchanting style to the house once it is down.

Jade
With regard to your inquiry for property 2260 loated(located) in Palma de Gandia, please be informed (this does not sound castizo. You could leave this out, just put, it is located in....)that it is located on(in) a very pretty spot in the old part of the town. The property needs complete refurbishing work,(needs completely refurbishing) which will give an enchanting style(???) to the house once it is down (done/completed/finished)

 

[Jade]

Thank you very much Frank!

Jade
With regard to your inquiry for property 2260 loated(located) in Palma de Gandia, please be informed (this does not sound castizo. You could leave this out, just put, it is located in....)that it is located on(in) a very pretty spot in the old part of the town. The property needs complete refurbishing work,(needs completely refurbishing) which will give an enchanting style(???) to the house once it is down (done/completed/finished)

 

[omeyas]

Thank you very much Frank!

¡De nada! Para eso estamos, ¿no? Soy un "newbie" por estos lares, pero tengo muchas ganas de mejorar mi pésimo nivel de español.
A propósito, ¡me gusta Gandía!

 

[Masood]

I'm not sure if there's much difference, but I'd use 'enquiry' instead of 'inquiry'.
'inquiry' (to me) means more like something is 'on trial' in a quest for truth.
Others may beg to differ.

 

[cuchuflete]

Hola Geno,

Ya no me necesitas! Tienes a Frank/Omeyas, newbie pero muy buen colaborador.

Me has dado una sonrisa con lo de Done/down. "The house will require a thorough refurbishing. We suggest you knock it down and start over." Just kidding.

un saludo
Cuchu

 

[Chaucer]

¿Otras versiones?

With regard to your inquiry on property 2260 in Palma de Gandia, it is located on a pretty spot in the old part of town. Please be informed that in order to give it that certain enchanted look, the property will need a complete refurbishing.

With regard to your inquiry on property 2260 in Palma de Gandia, it is located on a pretty spot in the old part of town. The property will need a complete refurbishing to give it that certain enchanted look.

 

[Jade]

Cuchuflete,

pensaba decirtelo en privado pero lo he pensado mejor y te lo diré públicamente. Omeyas, el newbie, se ha estrenado muy bien conmigo, es mal le gusta Gandia pero voy muy dificil que supere la escala de disponibilidad que has adquirido.


Un abrazo a todos mis fieles colaboradores

Jade

Hola Geno,

Ya no me necesitas! Tienes a Frank/Omeyas, newbie pero muy buen colaborador.

Me has dado una sonrisa con lo de Done/down. "The house will require a thorough refurbishing. We suggest you knock it down and start over." Just kidding.

un saludo
Cuchu

 

[el alabamiano]

With regard to your inquiry for property 2260 loated in Palma de Gandia, please be informed that it is located on a very pretty spot in the old part of the town. The property needs complete refurbishing work, which will give an enchanting style to the house once it is down.

Regarding your inquiry about Property #2260 in Palma de Gandia, please be firstly informed that the house does need repairs. However, the house sits on a very pretty lot in the older section of town and restoration, upon completion, will return the home to its beautifully enchanting style.

 

[Jade]

Gracias, me ha gustado mucho!

 

[omeyas]

Cuchuflete,

pensaba decirtelo en privado pero lo he pensado mejor y te lo diré públicamente. Omeyas, el newbie, se ha estrenado muy bien conmigo, es mal le gusta Gandia pero voy muy dificil que supere la escala de disponibilidad que has adquirido.


Un abrazo a todos mis fieles colaboradores

Jade

¡Ay! ¡Zalamera! Pero, muchas gracias Jade, eres muy amable. (¿aquí nos tuteamos?)