Women only show that side

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Gabriel Aparta

Senior Member
Español - Venezuela
Hi, please tell me if this sentence is correct, English is not my first language:

Women only show that side to men who they feel sexually attracted.

Thanks!
 
  • dojibear

    Senior Member
    English - Northeast US
    I assume "that side" refers to something described before this sentence.

    The sentence is almost correct. It needs to in it twice. If a woman feels sexually attracted to a man, she will show this side of herself to that man.

    In AE, you can simply add "to" at the end:

    Women only show that side to men who they feel sexually attracted to.

    More acceptable (but more formal) is this rewording:

    Women only show that side to men to whom they feel sexually attracted.
     
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