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deslenguada

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Castellano
Which one sounds the best to your ears?

We are interested in knowing flight fares and hotel tariffs for this period of the year and

a) if/whether to pay a deposit is necessary if we choose to use your services.
b) if/whether it is necessary to pay a deposit if we choose to use your services.
b) if we choose to use your services to pay a deposit is necessary




I would like to know your opinions ;) Thank you.

PS: In a) and b) which sounds more suitable "whether" or "if" ?
 
  • aulait

    Member
    UK - English, Chinese
    b) whether it is necessary to pay a deposit if we choose to use your services.

    This one sounds the most correct
     
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