Would this be okay for a birthday card?

Strangeland

New Member
Russian
I came up with this phrase.. "Wish you to (always) have the most treasured ones close to you." Does it make sense? I mean 'treasured ones' as 'important people' but I'm not sure if it sounds alright.

Thanks.
 
  • Beryl from Northallerton

    Senior Member
    British English
    Hello Strangeland, and Welcome to the Forum! :)

    I think 'treasured ones' sounds okay, if a little unusual, but that's not necessarily a bad thing.

    Let's see what others think. :)
     

    omidnice

    Senior Member
    Turkish - Azerbaijani
    I agree with Beryl's response, and treasured ones implies people who are important and attractive to you.
     
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