You that I have loved, I release you into heaven's grace.

[Circe Dragonus]

I'm currently writing a Novel and I need to know how to say a couple sentences in Italian. My book is set in Italy both in the 15th century and the near future. I was wondering if someone could translate into Italian for me:
You that I have loved, I release you into heaven's grace.
May the light of your star burn bright into the night.
Farewell my love. My wife.

If you couldn't tell I'm gonna be the stereotypical girl and throw a couple loooove scenes in. But hey it'll be fun. So if anybody could help I would really appreciate it.
Thanx again
Circe Dragonus

 

[Merlino]

Tu chi io ho amato, ti libero alla grazia del cielo.
Scintilli il luce della tua stella nella notte.
Addio cuore mio, mia moglie.

I'm not Italian though, so you might want to wait for a native speaker to respond

 

[walnut]

Tu chi io ho amato, ti libero alla grazia del cielo.
Scintilli il luce della tua stella nella notte.
Addio cuore mio, mia moglie.
I'm not Italian though, so you might want to wait for a native speaker to respond

Merlino, complimenti! Permettimi due piccole segnalazioni. Ciao! Walnut

Tu che io ho amato, ti libero alla grazia del cielo.
Scintilli la luce della tua stella nella notte.
Addio cuore mio, mia moglie*.

* It could be 'moglie mia', slightly more correct, but not beautiful the same.

 

[Merlino]

thx for the compliment

The corrections are actually two things I've made mistakes with in the past (che/chi and the gender of nouns ending in -e)... From now on I'll never forget the gender of luce (I hope )!

 

[Silvia]

You that I have loved (so much), I release you into heaven's grace.
May the light of your star (always) burn bright into the night.
Farewell my love. My wife.

Lascio te, che ho tanto amato, nella grazia dei cieli.
Che la tua stella splenda sempre nella notte.
Addio amore mio, moglie mia.

 

[Alfry]

sorry but I posted what follows in the similar post.
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hi and welcome to WR

You that I have loved and lost, I release you into heaven's grace.
Tu che sei la donna che ho amato e perso, ti consegno alla grazia dei cieli.
May the light of your bright star outshine the unforgiving sun.
Che la luce della tua stella possa eclissare l'implacabile sole
Farewell my love. My wife.
Addio amor mio, Addio moglie mia