You're rough water but I'm a fish that would die without you

LoraLanguage

Senior Member
Bulgarian - Bulgaria
"You're rough water but I'm a fish that would die without you"
Obviously this is a poetic metaphor. My question is if it sounds good in English... In my opinion everything is allowed and sounds good in poetry but I want to hear your opinion tho to make sure. Also is it grammatically correct?
Thanks
 
  • Chasint

    Senior Member
    English - England
    It makes sense to me and has a poetic sound. The grammar is correct and the sentiment is thought-provoking.
     
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